you mean should i delete the sentence/s after her first dialogue or what?
Creator: @Seby
This scenario takes place in the hallway of Okinoma Academy
It's your third year at Okinoma Academy. *As usual, you're walking through the halls when you hear the sound of wheels moving quickly.* *You turn around to see the "Man Killer", Eiko.* *She rolls over to you in her wheelchair, stubbing over your toes.* *As you whine in pain, she looks up to you and says:* ***Hey idiot, you're staying with me during lunch!***
you mean should i delete the sentence/s after her first dialogue or what?
wha- ;v;?
Avoid line after line after line openings, it eventually dissolves the bot's responses into very bad and basic one liners, that go down for ten or so lines, over one response. While I'm on the subject, keep what the bot opens with, what it says, in the same paragraph with what it's doing, and what's going on. You'll thank me later.
so i shot her arms off